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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In today's world, more and more people consider that in the nearest future convenience foods will become viral and will replace traditional methods of nutrition. I agree with
this
 opinion and
this
 essay will discuss the
possibel
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possible
 arguments to support my idea.
To begin
 with, on the one hand, the majority prefers semi-finished products since it saves a huge amount of time.
This
 is because of the fact that not only do humans have
extremely
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 rapid
life style
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lifestyle
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 but
also
 they do not have enough time for cooking and it is more
convinient
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convenient
 for them to buy an additional portion of salad in Tesco.
Therefore
, since the speed of life is increasing every
minue
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minute
 in a couple of years workers will not have time for food preparation and will eat only already prepared
meals
.
For example
, recent research has shown that in the UK more than 30% of citizens feed their families with convenience food and do not have cooking skills at all.
Moreover
, the majority of modern humans consider cooking to be boring and they like the variety of
meals
 they can order from delivery. The main reason for
this
 is that people got used to
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fewer
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 efforts and energy into housing work and devote their whole existence to work.
As a result
, not only does the majority of women hate to prepare nutrition but
also
 they enjoy changing
meals
 every day ordering from different restaurants or purchasing them in supermarkets.
For instance
, one study has illustrated that about 40% of housewives answered that they think that cooking is the most
unpleasent
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unpleasant
 thing that they have to do. Eventually, to conclude, I agree with the opinion that convenience food will replace traditional
meals
 in the nearest future. Two major causes of
this
 tendency
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 that,
firstly
,
this
 method is not time-consuming and,
secondly
, since humans can avoid monotonous and boring work.
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