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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society on individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Although
 it is sometimes thought that
children
 ought to afforded to opted daily stuff,
this
 method brings
children
 to only think about their own wishes.
However
 other
people
 believe that they supposed to make a
selection
 on essential matters. On the one hand, a number of
people
 believe that
children
 should be allowed to select typical matters
for instance
 food, clothes and entertainment and I agree. In other word,
children
 have to be tough gradually by their
parents
 in making a
decision
 about everyday stuff.
This
 to train their brain and educate them about thinking skill which really required by them in daily
life
.
As a result
, the
children
 can make a
decision
 for their daily matter without asking someone for help or taking a longer duration to execute the
selection
. Another point to consider is that teaching
children
 to be matured in their
selection
 of daily
life
 requires a process.
For
instance
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 many mistakes will be made by them and during
this
 period
parents
 supposed to play their vital roles in guidance and advice their
children
 about the consequence of their
selection
.
Besides
 that, in the process to teach
children
 to be more accurate in making their
decision
 it is important to note that for all
parents
 to always remind their
children
 that we
also
 need to tolerate
people
 and not to become selfish.
On the other hand
, some
people
 trusted that
children
 have to afford an opportunity to make a
decision
 that affects their lives. By doing
this
 approach
children
 are expected to be more matured in making a
selection
. By doing
this
,
children
 will have their own goal and had a specific target for their
life
.
For example
,
parents
 can ask their
children
 what they want to do after finish a school session and provide several options for them to opt.
This
 approach directly prevents them to get involved in unnecessary activities
such
 as playing games. It is important to highlight that, society and country will
also
 obtain the benefit if
parents
 tough their
children
 to make a
decision
 that can affect their
life
 in future. In conclusion, while many
people
 vary in their opinion, I think is better for all
parents
 to teach their
children
 to make a simple
decision
first
 before expose them to make a tough
decision
.
Children
 require time to be matured in making
decision
 and
parents
 should be a mentor for them as reference.
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