At the present time , the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults , compared with the number of older people . Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages ?

In the present scenario , the

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of

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in most nations occupies a large proportion of younger than aged

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. There are more advantages of having a large

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and a small

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of senior citizens than its disadvantages , so

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essay outweighs its negative side .

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of benefits with a couple of drawbacks , followed by a reasoned conclusion . In terms of positive impacts of having a higher percentage of young

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in some tertiary , the

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is that growth in the workforce of the region .

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, the young

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are educated and the healthiest than other ages of

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more techno-savvy .

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, a higher employment ratio as well as an increased economy of the

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. Another benefit is that more younger generation means that more healthy society because they are not only less prone to chronic illnesses but

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have the highest physical fitness , so that less investment in their health , as a

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result ministry of state spent extra income on other important expenses . With regards to having a lower older

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has a low burden on the

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's economy due to they are more affected by serious health issues so the government's wages goes behind their treatment ,

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spend on their financial assistance . On the other hands, it has some negative impacts on a

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, the issue of unemployment produced in these states because most of the

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are graduated or having a master degree , so due to unavailability of more vacant place more than half of the percentage are jobless or working out of field in less remuneration. Another demerit is that lack of experienced

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because older

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have vast years of experience , so they are more beneficial to tackle a difficult situation in the workplace ,

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they can handle any tough thing very easily compared to adolescents . To conclude , a more

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of younger generation means more workforce and the most healthy culture , while it improves the ratio of unemployment and few older

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means less spending on their health ,

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lack of experienced individuals in the

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phenomenon has more merits than its demerits so it outweighs its negative outcomes .