The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables above show the
population
in the world and how they are distributed in six regions in 1950 and 2000.
Furthermore
, an estimated situation in 2050 is
also
included. The area that accounts for the largest percentage is Asia both in 1950 and 2000. The region that has the least rate in 1950
ans
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and
2000 is Oceania. The rate
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increased in Africa, Asia, Latin
America
, and Oceania;
however
, decreased in Europe and North
America
. In Europe, the decline was significant: it was 10
percentage
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.
Overall
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world
population
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increased by about 2.5 times more. For the estimation for 2050, the world
population
will grow by 1.5 times more;
on the other hand
, the
population
of Asia, Europe, and North
America
will decrease. The only region that will grow is Africa and it will raise by 7%. Latin
America
and Oceania will not change by 2050.
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