Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today's world is
way
past our imaginations compared to before is because of the development in technology
. There has been much discussion going on nowadays that way
of out life was easier when the technology
was basic. I strongly disagree, as our day to day activities turned way
easy because of the advancement.
Previously, communication with others was only through one or two ways like the postal, telegraph, but now that was turned to way
lot more chances like audio, video calls, emails with the use of social media and other platforms. To precise, we can call a person who is on either end of the poles with our highly sophisticated technology
. Not only communication but also
the way
of life has changed a lot by the use of gadgets which made our day activates easier like a cakewalk. For instance
to be simple, early morning coffee by vending machine will save time.
Some still argue that technological improvement has made man a robot. These advancement has made him lose his emotional side by being himself more on online rather than spending time with elders compared to before . Furthermore
, we can still see cyber crimes are increasing drastically all over the world like fake bank transactions, money laundering. Although
, they can be controlled by the latest updates in technology
.
In conclusion, Having considering both the views, I strongly think technology
made our life easier compared to before. Even though it has a darker side like cybercrime increment, the developing technology
will definitely out ways the drawbacks.Submitted by kp on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
