in recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping or malls to do their shopping. is it a positive or a negative development?

In the competitive era,

people

are engaged in graveyards shifts

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to ameliorated and exotic lifestyles, under which they lead to arduous extract for small business because in present days

people

prefer to go

for

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shopping in enormous

malls

rather than small shops. According to my ,

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it has a negative development and

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will discuss it in the posterior paragraphs. Admittedly, local shops have benefited

for

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the

people

of the middle class, how can not afford the expenses of luxurious

malls

.

Hence

, poor masses have no source of income because certain youngsters have no money for

further

education so that time they prefer to

work

in small emporium to start earning money.

On the other hand

, in plaza grant their job for educated, intelligent or good personality get the good salaries in the mall.

For example

, in past time, if someone was not performing the best in the studies

then

parents had open a shop for them to start their

work

but nowadays that kind of option is working because remarkable presentation influence on customer mind.

Furthermore

, the unemployment rate is merging day by day

that is

big predicaments

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every nation. Whenever the small

stores

have opened everyone can afford the budget of small shops but in modern time masses can ignore their wishes.

For example

, in a recent survey done by the York ,university 75% of

people

likes

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to go shopping in local

stores

rather than

malls

.

Thus

, they asked

malls

are very expensive only a few folklore pay the bills of

malls

and wear the branded attire. In the outskirts most

the

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people

can run their family small business they have only local

stores

if the

stores

have closed

then

what they are eating and how they survive in the field. To sum up, local business has enormously benefited

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the middle-class family so, positive development outweighs negative development. It is an indispensable issue so the government should take certain steps for small

work

and must give them some funds to expand their

work

.