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Some people believe that old buildings should be replaced with more modern ones. Other people argue that we should protect old buildings because they have a special value. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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It is often argued that ancient
buildings
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 and
palaces
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 should be removed to construct the latest style
buildings
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, while others think that historic
buildings
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 must be protected as they have a unique value.
This
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 essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as, to why aged
buildings
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 should be protected.
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, in many countries governments and local bodies give more importance to preserving old
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 and
palaces
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 because it reflects their culture and architecture, and
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 increases tourism and economic development.
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, one daily NEWS paper conducted an online survey in India and reported that many foreign country people are interested to visit historic
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 and aged temples to see the beauty of constructions, interior designs and artwork.
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, people are keen to see the ancient
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such
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 as Mysore Palace, Taj Mahal, Thomas church, because it reflects the culture and way of life.
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, some view the replacement of old
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 with apartments as a necessity due to congestion and overcrowding. Another main issue is a lack of space in cities to build new villas and government offices to serve the people.
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, governments are forced to demolish the historic
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 which are located in the centre of the city.
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, few days before Chennai corporation published one circular in the daily magazine, regarding the knocking down of the lighthouse which was
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 ,replaced with new bridges in order to control the traffic jams in the city. To conclude, I strongly believe that ancient
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 and
buildings
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 always have a peculiar value and identity of the nation. So, governments and tourism departments should make plans and policies to save
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buildings
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, maintaining properly to attract visitors.
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