You are planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. • describe a vacation spot you have chosen • explain how you plan to spend your time there • invite your friend to join you on your vacation.
Dear Friend,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to let you know that I am planning to take a vacation and it would be awesome if you join me.
Nowadays life feels quite busy and I wanted to take a break and relax.
Thus
I have chosen a beautiful beach in Florida. The beach was placed on a peaceful island with clear water. Also
, there are lots of activities to enjoy such
as swimming, scuba diving, and boat competitions on nearby island.
I have already prepared necessary
arrangements and we are leaving on 15th May and returning on 5th June. And Correct article usage
the necessary
also
I have booked a deluxe villa which has a special pool with beautiful views of palms.
I know that travel plans can be challenging, however
I believe Add a comma
however,
this
vacation will be worth it.
I hope you can join me on this
trip. Please let me know your response as soon as possible. I am waiting ambitiously our
adventure to Florida.
Yours Change preposition
for our
sincerelly
,
Mr BeaR.Correct your spelling
sincerely
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Coherence & Cohesion
To improve coherence, ensure that each paragraph flows smoothly into the next. Use linking words like 'Furthermore,' 'Additionally,' or 'Consequently' to create a more seamless transition between ideas.
Coherence & Cohesion
For better cohesion, attempt to keep paragraphs focused on a single idea. This was managed well in your letter, but could be further refined by ensuring each paragraph introduces a new element of your topic unmistakably.
Task Achievement
To enhance task achievement, make sure that every aspect of the prompt is addressed comprehensively. You've done a great job inviting your friend and describing the vacation, but exploring more specifics about how you imagine spending your time together might provide a richer response.
Task Achievement
Adopting a slightly more formal or varied sentence structure could elevate your writing. While the tone is suitable, experimenting with complex sentences or a broader vocabulary could make your letter stand out.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,