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In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more?

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Nowadays, it is possible to underline that, especially for teenagers, there are always few
people
 that go to classical
music
 concerts or decide to start playing classical
music
. In fact, according to many classic musicians, the average number of years that usually attend their concert is between 60 and more.
First
 of all, the main reasons that could answer
this
 topic are established to the new generations idols and
also
 the way in which famous radio, television and social platform, decided to reproduce only new commercial songs. Because of
this
, new generations are impressed by their radio and television idols and for
this
 reason, they prefer to listen to a new type of
music
.
In addition
, it is important to remember that
also
 the
music
 is changed, rap and trap
music
 represent now the biggest business in CD and concerts sells.
Although
 classical
music
 is "going out of fashion", it is still recommended
for example
 by mindfulness trainers, psychologists, and scientific medics in order to relax and reduce stress in your body and mind. For
this
 reason,
people
 should be encouraged to listen
also
this
 kind of
music
 and to learn more about their authors because they usually represent
people
 famous all over the world. To conclude, it is true that the
music
 market is changed and it is important to accept that, but I personally believe in the power of classical
music
 because it could do understand especially
to
Change preposition
by
show examples
 young
people
 if they are passionate about some instruments
for example
.
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