A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He/she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * suggest an interesting part of the city to live in * describe the public transport in your city * say how your friend can meet new people there Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ______________,

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Dear Sandy, When I read your letter that you moving to Sydney for your work, I was so hyped up that I can
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meet you soon. Regarding your first question about great areas that are good to live in, I personally think northwest areas would be the fascinating suburbs for you. Especially Rhodes and Meadowbank are quiet and cosy areas where family group members likely live
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. The second thing you asked to explain about public transportation. we have a few different kinds of public transportation
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as metro, trains, buses and light rail. I definitely recommend taking light rails if you take a stroll around the city.
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, trains are the most common public transport in Sydney.
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, I know you are worried about making new friends in the new city. As long as you know
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your hobbies are, you can join any kind of community about your favourite things to do here.
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, I can introduce my friends to you if you like. I wish you the best of luck on your new journey, hope to see you soon! Best regards, Chaewon K
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grammar
Try to avoid minor grammatical errors and typographical errors (e.g., "you moving" should be "you're moving"). This will enhance the clarity and professionalism of your writing.
cohesion
Consider adding transition phrases to improve the flow between paragraphs. For instance, "Regarding your question about public transportation, ..." can be transitioned more smoothly with a phrase like "As for public transportation,..."
task response
You provided a complete response to the task and covered all points asked in the prompt.
tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for a letter to a friend.
cohesion
You used paragraphing effectively to separate ideas, making the letter easy to follow.
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