It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best both for individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays there many opinions in society that the population must get married not later than they are 30-years old. In
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essay, I am going to find the answer for me about
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huge community problem.
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of all,
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issue is really big because the young nation afraid of lots of things
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as they don't have well-paid jobs, they can be not well-educated or
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they haven't good accommodations. All these mentioned topics sometimes bother the generation to take the most important step in their life to have a family. In that case, they are trying to build their carrier and they are starting to think about children only after 35-years old when unfortunately their health not so good in
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time or can be other difficulties
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as their age in plus 10 years as
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would be another, not like people who got birth to a baby in 25-years old.
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, as I had written before age is the main factor, so for community starts to have a gender gap. Due to
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problem governments are trying to plan some different programs like giving money for
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and
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kids, support families who have got up to 3 kids,
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they are going to enter some annually paid money before entering school,
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, in Russia. And if we speak about german's experience, they paid 300 euro per kid every month until they are 18-years old. To sum up, ideas which I mentioned earlier, I believe that I fully agree with
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statement that it is necessary to get married as soon as possible not to have lots of problems with your own health or with your baby's health in the future. So lots of countries now have a huge amount of social programmes ,not people afraid of the lack of money, they should think about their happy future with people whom they in loved with.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fertility
  • Maternal health
  • Psychological stability
  • Social maturity
  • Economic benefits
  • Shared responsibilities
  • Ancestral customs
  • Cultural imperatives
  • Personal development
  • Career establishment
  • Societal norms
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Divorce rates
  • Life decisions
  • Subjective wellbeing
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