Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Animals

and

humans

are equal rights to survive on the earth.It is believed that some individuals think that

hefty

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amount and time should be provided to save

the

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wild pets and birds.I completely agree with

this

given statement and the reasons for my opinion will be elucidated in the forthcoming paragraphs with relevant illustrations. To commence with,

government

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should

paying

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pay

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attention to save

the

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wild

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wildlife

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life

because it is part of our ecosystem.The

first

and foremost reason is that wild

speices

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species

plays a crucial role to maintain the balance of

life

on earth.

For example

, bats

are mostly eat

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the

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insects and protect

people

's crop from vanish.So that they earn money from the wheat and rice in every

seasons

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.Apart from

this

, if

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the government

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show

careless

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carelessness

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about the

animals

lives they could not survive on the earth and

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ecosytem

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ecosystem

would not live stable.It

is

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also

affect

on

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the environment

,

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if

people

will kill

animals

and birds. To add more, it

is

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also

affect

on

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the

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humans

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lives.

In addition

to it, if individuals cut the forest and kill the

animals

they could not find the food and it could be harmed for the

humans

.

For instance

, if

people

will vanish the forest

then

wild

animals

such

as tiger, lion and many more will come on the road and

people

's houses and trying to harm the

humans

.

As a result

, individuals

life

will peril and they will not survive on the planet. To conclude, owing to the reasons

such

as balance the ecosystem and protect the

humans

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lives.I am in favour that

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should

spent

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much

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efforts on to save the

wild

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wildlife

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life

.