You received electricity bills but it is too high because of wrong meter reading. Write to the concern person and explain the problem.

Dear sir, I am living in a block forest street house number 234. I have a problem
about
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my electricity bill. I received lost month my house electric power statement
in
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apply

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yesterday while I shocked when I was seeing
power
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due
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because it is too high
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compare
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to our regular bill
amount
.
This
means double the
amount
are
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written in our account but it is not possible because we are working persons so almost spend a lot of time in our office and
last
month we have not used much more because previous month our family had been living outside where vocation place. I think my energy meter has been
showed
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wrong reading
instead
of right
therefore
our hydro invoice were high. If you would rectify the mistake I could
be relax
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.
Hence
, as soon as possible you would clear all the troubles about
this
and you could give accurate power
amount
due in order
to
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I can take a relax
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waiting for your positive response. thank you. your's faithfully,

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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