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You received electricity bills but it is too high because of wrong meter reading. Write to the concern person and explain the problem.

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Dear sir, I am living in a block forest street house number 234. I have a problem
about
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 my electricity bill. I received
lost
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the lost
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 month
my
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of my
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 house electric power statement
in
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apply
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yesterday while I
shocked
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 when I was seeing
power
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the power
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 due
amount
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 because it is too high
amount
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compare
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 to our regular bill
amount
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.
This
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 means double the
amount
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are
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 written in our account but it is not possible because we are working persons so almost spend a lot of time in our office and
last
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 month we have not used much more because previous month our family had been living outside where vocation place. I think my energy meter has been
showed
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showing
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 wrong reading
instead
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 of right
therefore
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 our hydro
invoice
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 were high. If you would rectify the mistake I could
be relax
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be relaxed
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.
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, as soon as possible you would clear all the troubles about
this
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 and you could give accurate power
amount
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 due in order
to
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so
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 I can take a relax
brethe
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breathe
. I am
eagarly
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eagerly
 waiting for your positive response. thank you. your's faithfully,
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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