A number of people are moving from rural area's to cities.its a positive or nagative development?

Mostly individuals are migrating
country
side to metropolis
cities
for their brilliant future. Nowadays, it's bacame a trend relocating one place to another . In
this
essay will discuss whether moving agarian to developed
cities
is fruitful or not for
people
as well as their countries. There are number of unfortunate consequences for those
people
who are relocating agarian to metropolis
cities
.
Although
there are more opportunities than undeveloped
areas
such
as, better job opportunities, medical services, education, , public transport,well maintained roads etc, and despite all the facilities its problematic issues for those
cities
: increasing manpower creats traffic congestion on roads as well as pollution
also
, which is not good for habitat environment.
As a result
, humans health impacts because of it.
Moreover
migrated
people
unable to find a house to live
Although
, living in agricultural area's has some drawbacks: lack of territory education, health services,, decline infrastructures system by the government,etc . Even though it has several disadvantages but it's inevitable merits ,which are require for any nation
people
. Agriculture plays a vital role to uplift the economy of any
country
.farmers grow crops in
country
side area and farming area requires natural environment .if all
people
will go to develop
areas
then
who will grow crops.what will
people
eat for live.
Moreover
, economic conditions of that
country
will fell down . In conclusion, there are some positive merits and demerits for their
country
development.
Thus
, In my point of view there should be make a eqillbrum between the develope
country
and rural
areas
people
, and
also
government should arrange enough facilities for undeveloped
areas
.
Submitted by naresh on

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Try other services:

All the services are free for Premium users