Mrs Barreet, an English-Speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help in her home for a few hours a day up to next summer Write a letter to Mrs Barreet. In your letter 1. Suggest how you could help her in her home 2. Say why you would like to do this work 3. Explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Bareet,
I am Francis living in Coimbatore city. Recently, I have seen an advertisement in a newspaper that article was published by you, it was about a job in your home activity. I mentioned everything in
this
letter, why I really need this
job.
I cook very well and the items like salads, soups, boiled rice with vegetable gravy. Especially, mushroom Manchurian. Not only this
, I can do vessel washing as well. Moreover
, I can go for pay electricity, groceries and also
bank work. So these all I can do.
I would to do like this
job because I need money for my college fee. Also
, I have to purchase a bike for my personal usage purposes. Lastly
, I really well know English (I am studying English literature) it will really help you, we can easily communicate together.
My available times are Monday to Saturday from 10 am to 1 pm, if anything needed
on Sunday let me know, and I will keep supporting you well.
I am eagerly waiting for your valuable feedback.
Yours truthfully,
FRANCIS J.PAdd a missing verb
is needed
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coherence cohesion
Use clear paragraphing with each paragraph covering a single idea.
coherence cohesion
Polish the greeting and closing to add formality.
task achievement
Ensure completeness by detailing specific tasks in each area mentioned to enhance task achievement.
task achievement
Maintain a polite and professional tone throughout to improve writing tone.
task achievement
Mention of specific skills (cooking, household errands) shows capability and intention in task response.
task achievement
The reason for wanting the job is clearly stated, contributing positively to task achievement.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,