Some people believe that children should obey rules and listen to their parents. Some others believe that less controlling will help children deal with adults’ life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays,
children
are expected to follow their parents
’ desires and do what they are asked to. However
, opponents of this
idea argue that being more independent during childhood could help them cope with difficulties in their later life. While there are some benefits of being guided by parents
on many occasions, I personally believe that children
can develop better if their parents
are their supporters, not controllers.
Firstly
, every child needs to have caring
family for many purposes because they need to be supported Add an article
a caring
by
both financially and physically. Even though having strict Change preposition
apply
parents
could help some people to be more organized, disciplined and as a
result
be more successful in their professional, there are a lot of cases that it had negative consequences. These Add a comma
,result
children
are always in a hurry and afraid of their actions’ results because they always have to take into account their parents
’ criticism. To illustrate, children
with strict and controlling parents
tend to spend less time outside with their peers which results in lack
of trust and self-confidence. So, all these traumas Correct article usage
a lack
children
receive because of their parents
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parent's
parents'
behaviors
towards them affect their decisions adversely in their Change the spelling
behaviours
adults
life.
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adult's
adults'
However
, there are some successful ways of bringing up standing
adults. One of them is to be more friendly towards the Correct your spelling
upstanding
children
as a parent. It is clear that children
have a lot of things to learn from their parents
as they grow up, in this
way parents
should be their supporters instead
of drawing boundaries for their own children
. Moreover
, as every generation’s way of thinking differs, parents
should consider their children
’s mental state too. For example
, travelling a lot and participating in dozens of trainings
were uncommon during some current Change the wording
training
pieces of training
parents
’ childhood, however
, nowadays Gen Z children
love to do these activities. By this
, I concur that children
could be more confident and experienced which can help them be more successful later.
To sum up, even though parents
guide children
through our development period, they shouldn’t judge their children
’s choices, but support them which is more
effective way of upbringing.Add an article
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