Some people believe that children should obey rules and listen to their parents. Some others believe that less controlling will help children deal with adults’ life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays,
children
are expected to follow their Use synonyms
parents
’ desires and do what they are asked to. Use synonyms
However
, opponents of Linking Words
this
idea argue that being more independent during childhood could help them cope with difficulties in their later life. While there are some benefits of being guided by Linking Words
parents
on many occasions, I personally believe that Use synonyms
children
can develop better if their Use synonyms
parents
are their supporters, not controllers.
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Firstly
, every child needs to have Linking Words
caring
family for many purposes because they need to be supported Add an article
a caring
by
both financially and physically. Even though having strict Change preposition
apply
parents
could help some people to be more organized, disciplined and Use synonyms
as a
Linking Words
result
be more successful in their professional, there are a lot of cases that it had negative consequences. These Add a comma
,result
children
are always in a hurry and afraid of their actions’ results because they always have to take into account their Use synonyms
parents
’ criticism. To illustrate, Use synonyms
children
with strict and controlling Use synonyms
parents
tend to spend less time outside with their peers which results in Use synonyms
lack
of trust and self-confidence. So, all these traumas Correct article usage
a lack
children
receive because of their Use synonyms
Use synonyms
parents
Change to a genitive case
parent's
parents'
behaviors
towards them affect their decisions adversely in their Change the spelling
behaviours
adults
life.
Change to a genitive case
adult's
adults'
However
, there are some successful ways of bringing Linking Words
up standing
adults. One of them is to be more friendly towards the Correct your spelling
upstanding
children
as a parent. It is clear that Use synonyms
children
have a lot of things to learn from their Use synonyms
parents
as they grow up, in Use synonyms
this
way Linking Words
parents
should be their supporters Use synonyms
instead
of drawing boundaries for their own Linking Words
children
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, as every generation’s way of thinking differs, Linking Words
parents
should consider their Use synonyms
children
’s mental state too. Use synonyms
For example
, travelling a lot and participating in dozens of Linking Words
trainings
were uncommon during some current Change the wording
training
pieces of training
parents
’ childhood, Use synonyms
however
, nowadays Gen Z Linking Words
children
love to do these activities. By Use synonyms
this
, I concur that Linking Words
children
could be more confident and experienced which can help them be more successful later.
To sum up, even though Use synonyms
parents
guide Use synonyms
children
through our development period, they shouldn’t judge their Use synonyms
children
’s choices, but support them which is Use synonyms
more
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