Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior. discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is often argued by some that the best way of education is achieved through individualised
lessons
, while others believe that they are
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outperformed

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by class
lessons
. In my opinion, I consider that
group
teachings help learners to achieve the most important skills for their future, including cooperation and competition. On the one hand, some people think that students who learn on a one-on-one basis achieve a better understanding of
lessons
learnt.
This
is because the teacher will focus on them completely until they are sure they understand the topic.
Therefore
, it is more effective to educate one in
this
manner because it guarantees good results.
For example
, my husband prefers to teach
paino
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piano

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lessons
to one person at a time because the student will grasp the teachings faster and precisely.
On the other hand
, it is sometimes thought that learners ought to study in a
group
because it helps them to compete as well as cooperate and I agree.
In other words
, there is always competition to see who is the best which makes students study harder and again in a
group
there is sharing of ideas.
Thus
, there is healthy learning in a class as individuals are
equiped
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with essential skills that are useful in life.
For example
, teachers always give positions to
student's
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students
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according to their performance resulting in them working harder to attain better positions. In conclusion,
although
personalized learning is effective in making learners understand better, I believe it is
group
learning
that is
more essential as it motivates and encourages sharing,
consequently
giving them a chance to do better in school as well as later in life.

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