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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior. discuss both views and give your own opinion

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It is often argued by some that the best way of education is achieved through individualised
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 , while others believe that they are
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outperformed
 by class
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. In my opinion, I consider that
group
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 teachings help learners to achieve the most important skills for their future, including cooperation and competition. On the one hand, some people think that students who learn on a one-on-one basis achieve a better understanding of
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 learnt.
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 is because the teacher will focus on them completely until they are sure they understand the topic.
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, it is more effective to educate one in
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 manner because it guarantees good results.
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, my husband prefers to teach
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piano
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 to one person at a time because the student will grasp the teachings faster and precisely.
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, it is sometimes thought that learners ought to study in a
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 because it helps them to compete as well as cooperate and I agree.
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, there is always competition to see who is the best which makes students study harder and again in a
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 there is sharing of ideas.
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 , there is healthy learning in a class as individuals are
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equipped
 with essential skills that are useful in life.
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, teachers always give positions to
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according to their performance resulting in them working harder to attain better positions. In conclusion,
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 personalized learning is effective in making learners understand better, I believe it is
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 learning
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 more essential as it motivates and encourages sharing,
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 giving them a chance to do better in school as well as later in life.
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