Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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surroundings trouble in day-to-day life.

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, a fair amount of people believe that threat of flora and fauna extinction is the main issue of

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problem but others say that there are more paramount atmosphere obstacles. Viewing from a general perspective, the essay discusses both viewpoints, I

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, when

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animals like Tigers and Lions are eliminating while

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of herbivores.

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like rabbit, pig, and deer

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, these animals will eat up all farm produce

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trend can lead to food scarcity all around the world.

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, climate change is the fundamental threat of habitat

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as pollution,

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gas effect and global

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result, many coastal cities are submerged to the global.

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, climate change causes frequently

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drought and flooding. Other

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of health diseases both human and animals. when highly polluted are the folks are being lived while they will get many diseases like

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obviously, climate change is a bigger threat than the extinction of wildlife. If the

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temperature

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pace the planet may become inhabitable two or three centuries down the lane.

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
extinction
habitat loss
ecosystem
food chain
imbalance
interconnected
climate change
pollution
personal actions
policy changes
education
awareness

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