Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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modern era, people are faced
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surroundings trouble in day-to-day life.
However
, a fair amount of people believe that threat of flora and fauna extinction is the main issue of
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problem but others say that there are more paramount atmosphere obstacles. Viewing from a general perspective, the essay discusses both viewpoints, I
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personally
agree with
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the
former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, many species are eradicated can lead to causes of
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environmental
irrefutably
such
as break the food chain.
For example
, when
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predatory
animals like Tigers and Lions are eliminating while
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large
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of herbivores.
This
situation will affect the farm yield as
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animal
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like rabbit, pig, and deer
as a result
, these animals will eat up all farm produce
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consequently
,
this
trend can lead to food scarcity all around the world.
On the other hand
, climate change is the fundamental threat of habitat
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such
as pollution,
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gas effect and global
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temperature
temperatures
are rising. Polar ice
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melted
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heavily
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nowadays
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result, many coastal cities are submerged to the global.
Moreover
, climate change causes frequently
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occurrences
drought and flooding. Other
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reason
of health diseases both human and animals. when highly polluted are the folks are being lived while they will get many diseases like
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Asthma
, cancer and many birds
also
affect
such
as no longer survive where polluted region. To conclude, In my opinion about
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obviously, climate change is a bigger threat than the extinction of wildlife. If the
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temperature
temperatures
are rising to
this
pace the planet may become inhabitable two or three centuries down the lane.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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