some people think that strict punishment for driving ofences ảe the key to reducing traffic accidents.

Whether strict punishments or other remedies should be applied in order to enhance road safety has always been a matter of debate. From my personal perspective, both the punishment and a mass of other approaches can be
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at the same time to promote better driving practices.
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I strongly believe that the other road safety measures should be considered and
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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