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there is more and more violence in movies and on tv, therefore it is necessary for the government to control the amount of it to decrease the violent crime in the society. do you agree or disagree

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Technology is involved in every field
such
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 as
movies
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. Features like VFX give an advantage to the director to direct some unexpected scene in the film as seen in the
movies
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 in past few years.
People
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 love to watch
action
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movies
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. Few
people
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 are involved in the crimes by watching
action
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 and violent movie. The government should take some steps to restrict some limit on it so that they control
violence
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 in the real-
life
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. I agree with the provided statement.
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 of all, some big celebrities are act in
action
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movies
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.
People
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 all over the world are
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huge fan of Hollywood actors. Especially, the youngster loves to watch them in the theatre. They want to live a
life
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 like them and they copy every style of
action
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 heroes.
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, teenagers are involved in some crimes and
violence
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 as they have seen on tv.
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, youngster starts smoking and drinking at an early age by watching on tv. Later, they involved in
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illegal activities like buying and selling drugs that create
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big problem in their
life
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. All
this
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 good in the
movies
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 but in
real
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,
life
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 it would destroy
life
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.
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,
movies
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 like the dark knight and money heist.
People
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 are inspired by these
movies
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. To illustrate my point, when the dark knight release a person get an idea of killing
people
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 from the famous portrait joker and kill a number of
people
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 in the theatre.
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, many
people
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 copy the plan of robbery and murder from the
movies
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 and did the same as in the film. They successfully did it and never get caught. All
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 happen by the
violence
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 in the
movies
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. In conclusion, the government should take some serious
action
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 against the
violence
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 on the tv. The censor board have to put strict
guidance
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guidelines
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 in the
movies
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 that should help a lot to prevent the crimes in the
movies
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 as well as in
the
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society.
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