Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In
this
modern era, people
would like to celebrate all functions related to entertainment-based. However
, a fair amount of people
have disregrat
the definition of the conservative or holy carnivals when amid festival time due to today Correct your spelling
disregard
people
only desire to like themselves cmpared
to the past celebrations with meaningful. I strongly agree with Correct your spelling
compared
this
point and I will be mentioning my points in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are many reasons for nowadays people
have forgotten the interpretation behind the carnivals such
as traditional or religious. Firstly
, today generation folks are wanted to enjoy from
themselves and they are would not like to unite to celebrate. Change preposition
apply
For example
, a few christian
Change the capitalization
Christian
man
is being celebrated their most important day which New year how they are not gone to the Change to a plural noun
men
chruch
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church
on
Change preposition
at
proper
time when night prayer while they are being participated Correct article usage
the proper
New
year party.
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in New
Moreover
, the most youngesters
are would not like to the festivities in the olden Correct your spelling
youngsters
days
style because they need to get happiness from these kinds of festivities. Change to a genitive case
day's
days'
This
trend are
increased dramatically Change the verb form
is
Correct your spelling
due
du
to the human have been forgotten to the original value of these kinds of Correct your spelling
due
pageant
. Add an article
the pageant
Furthermore
, the government also
provide a long holiday for this
pageant in order to
they can take Correct your spelling
so
a
fun. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, in India government is given three days leave for the pongal
pageant while top actors movies will release Change the capitalization
Pongal
hence
the citizens are watched
movies Change the verb form
have watched
instead
of Change the capitalization
Pongal
pongal
celebration.
To conclude, irrefutably technology is the main victim of Correct article usage
the pongal
this
trend expand because the citizens are satisfied with these kinds of gadgets in form of get
more entertainment. I think in the future days the folks never celebrate to Change the verb form
getting
orthodex
or faithful festival undoubtedly because of they will need more expectation and love from anything.Correct your spelling
orthodox
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