Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education and that the government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
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thought governement
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be paid
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tuition
fees
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viewpoints
view points
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viewpoints
firstly
, the first
foremost reson
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reason
education
is it will bring parity in economy
.some folks who are unable to pursue higher studies due to Correct article usage
the economy
hefty
amount of Correct article usage
a hefty
fees
have to discontinue their career goals. however
, all tution
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tuition
fees
paid by government
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the government
benefit
for weaker section . Add an article
a benefit
for example
, countries like sweden
have taken the Change the capitalization
Sweden
intitative
to give free Correct your spelling
initiative
education
to their citizens . with this
contrast , there will be tremendous
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a tremendous
economy
as students will Add an article
the economy
be enable
to get high technology which will Change the verb form
be enabled
enchance
their knowledge and skills . everyone should Correct your spelling
enhance
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be
however
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social financial background . due to Correct your spelling
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more employment oppourinities
will be in Correct your spelling
opportunities
mark
which would help the companies and more educated people will be around the market .
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a mark
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secondly
, having a free education
will reduce the stress of parents as government
will be sponsoring all Add an article
the government
a government
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tuition
fees
and students can focus on their desired career goals freely . moreover
, their
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interefrence
of private Correct your spelling
interference
instituions
to exploit the students by charging them hefty Correct your spelling
institutions
fees
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non-economic
benfits
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benefits
such
as political involevment
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involvement
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the
education
system will be fair and provide equal opportunities to all . for instance
, a nation where literacy
rate is high will Correct article usage
the literacy
be invariably have
a high per capita income .
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invariably have
their
are several benefits to making Replace the word
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unveristy
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university
education
free for all . as it will decline the illiteracy rate in economy and right to edcuation
will be given to every student . Correct your spelling
education
hemce
government should take imperative measures to promote free Correct your spelling
hence
education
and explotive
policies like admission through gift should be abolished . Correct your spelling
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believe Change the capitalization
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educated
person is the biggest asset of the nation .Add an article
an educated
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