Some people think that children should be home schooled when they are very young while others think it is better for them to attend a kindergarten. Which do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There has been a debate revolving around the issue of whether children before starting their primary school should be taught at

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or whether they should start attending kindergarten. In

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I will discuss why it is important to count on professional educators for young children. I will provide some examples. There are several reasons to believe

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-schooling is better than sending kids to school at their early stage.

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, the lessons provided to

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group of learners are very simple, and many times they are comprised of scratching books, painting, and playing with plasticine.

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to that, the cost of kindergarten service is very expensive and that budget can be saved by guiding these activities at

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, having the little ones close to their mother and father allows them to observe their behaviour and how to mould it in a better way. To illustrate

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, a coworker at the office decided to tutor his 5-year-old boy and he recognizes that the great benefit of correcting inappropriate

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at the right time has helped in continuous improvements in his discipline.

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, it can not be disregarded that tutors who are focused on teaching pupils at an early stage have professional studies. The knowledge that teachers

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allow them to manage in the best way adequate lessons, assessments, and corrective actions that grant positive results in the intellectual, and behavioural development of the students. Another aspect

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crucial and makes an important difference when comparing with

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education is that the institutions have the assistance of nutritionists and psychologists that are very valuable

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with a comprehensive plan that

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help kids in their development. A study from Oxford University demonstrated that 80% of children that have been schooled by professionals before entering their primary level showed higher performance than the ones who have not. To conclude, it is clear that educating from

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has some benefits.

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, it is better to have specialized people in the field that can guide them and guarantee success in their learning curve.