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Some people think it is no longer necessary for children to go to school because they can do all their learning online. Others believe learning in schools is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The usage of technology in
education
 has come a long way causing virtual
education
 possible for everyone including
children
 in almost everywhere around the world.
This
 has caused some people to think about why they should send their
kids
 to
school
.
However
, there are still some people who believe attending
school
 is paramount.
This
 essay will explore and consider both views as well as why I think
kids
 should attend
school
 to build their social skills and prevent depression and isolation. According to the
first
 group, online learning is more relax and less stressful for
kids
. It is clear that when
kids
 do not have to get to
school
, they can sleep more, have their breakfast at home and start their class in the comfort of their room.
Also
, they do not need to wear formal cloth or uniform which make them be more relax.
Besides
,
parents
also
 will be more comfortable not having to drag their
children
 out of bed and be worried about traffic around
school
 or being late for work.
Hence
, virtual learning put
parents
 and
kids
 in less amount of day-to-day stress. Others,
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 opine that youngsters have to attend
school
 to have supervised
education
. If
kids
 are left on their own with their devices, who can guarantee they will log in to their classroom. There are so many other fun activities that can distract
kids
 online and prevent them from being in their virtual classroom.
For instance
, famous platforms like Instagram, Facebook, Tick Toc, Youtube can be more entertaining and distracting for a child who has no supervised online
education
.
Also
, some younger
kids
 can not be left alone at home if their
parents
 are at work.
Thus
, it is not practical for young
children
 and distracting for others without having someone to control attendance. In my view,
children
 should physically be present in
school
 to build their social skills by interacting with each other and adults.
This
 is a paramount skill that can be learnt only by being among others. When
kids
 are staying home all day in front of the screen they can not socialize and enjoy each other presence.
Besides
, not having physical contact is one of the most important causes of depression and isolation which can be prevented by having in-person contact at
school
. To sum up, there are two opposing views regarding
kids
education
. Some think that
parents
 should stop sending their
children
 to
school
 because it's easy and comfortable for both
parents
 and
kids
. I am with other group believing
children
 need to have supervised in-person
education
 in order to guarantee the quality of learning and to build social skills in order to have a healthy mind.
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