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Task 2 In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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At present, most young adults do not read newspapers and watch the
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 on tv. In my opinion, using a smartphone is one of the reasons behind
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 can be mitigated by limiting the
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 of devices. The predominant cause of not reading newspaper is that on the cellphone many interesting apps are available as well as fascinating games which consume a lot of
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 of young
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, teenagers are used to watching movies, videos, and spend most of their
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 on youtube. Nowadays,
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 spend their leisure
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 watching a long web series and tv series on Netflix and another ott platform
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 of watching the
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 or reading newspapers.
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, in a recent survey conducted among young children, 40% of them does not know about the recent activity around them.
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, fixing the limit of using a smartphone. If a parent allows children to
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 a phone only a few hours
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 they have enough
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 to utilize them in reading the
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 and watching the
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 on tv.
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, in the campus and college, ban the
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 of smart devices will surely affective to reduce the usage of electronic devices and promote spending
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 in the library to read paper
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. That method
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 beneficial in the offices and other working area, employers motivate their employees to up to date with the surroundings related to the
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. In conclusion,
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 spend most of their
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 on smartphone using apps and other things but they never
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 them to read the
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 should know about their country, what would happen in their city that only know by watching the
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