Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Organizing games has always been an integral part of human civilization. Currently, every year many international games are being organized frequently. A section of our society thinks that

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. They consider that local cultures got polluted with alien

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because a variety of

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visit the place either as participants or as spectators.

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benefited from the excellent infrastructures left behind after the completion of the event. these sports stadiums are used by local

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to learn and develop their sporting skills.

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many hidden talents come out to represent their nation's future sporting

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get employed during and after these big tournaments and participate in economical development. In conclusion, international sporting

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bring some bad things like

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international games have both good and bad effects on the

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

268 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

economic boost
infrastructure
national pride
cultural showcase
inspire a generation
temporary boost
environmental concerns
sustainable planning
public funds
divert resources
tourism influx
job opportunities
sports development
public health
construction
strategic investment
global audience
hospitality
public services
cost-benefit analysis

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Your opinion

Young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor activities such as hiking and climbing in nature. Why is this? And how can we encourage them to go out?

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Postponement, or the act of delaying a task, has been cited in some research articles as one of the factors for poor academic performance by some university students. What are some of the reasons behind students procrastinating, and what measures can be taken to address the problem?