Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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life

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exists

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people

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are facing a dilemma about should scientists send

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messages

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to find and communicate with aliens.

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dangerous to send

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planet we always try to prove that we are not alone in

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and scientists send signals to

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to find something. I reckon that facing

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aliens might lead to improvement of our planet and create new advanced

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medicine

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for cancer.

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our earth.

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, the whole new world will be open to us and there will be more opportunities for

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, meeting with

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another life form

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form can lead to extinction and wreak

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a lot of different

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scenarios

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, aliens may not be friendly and they might

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to destroy our planet and all humanity.

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, the fact that we are not alone in

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will affect a lot of

people

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and it might be hard to live without fear of war. In conclusion, I assume that

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we will find the other form of

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live

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cosmos

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and scientists should not stop

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messages, but no one can predict the consequences of

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, we should improve our

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and earth at

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and not search for other

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or help.

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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291 words

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Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (eg medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries,more and more people are hiring personal fitness trainers, rather than playing sports or doing excercise cleasses. what are the reasons for it? Is this a positive trend?

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.