You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his petformance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Mr.Simons, I am writing to express my admiration for your amazing concert performance at Dolmabahce Stadium. Your unique ability creates an atmosphere where everyone in the audience feels like they are soaring on a cloud. I aspire to a future career as a well-known lyricist, and you serve as my ultimate role model. During

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period, I have been immersing myself in your songs, committing each one to memory. Currently, I am part of a rock group called Penat, where I serve as the guitarist and vocalist for our original songs. Recently, I have been struggling with a creative block and am uncertain how to overcome it. I wonder if you have any recommendations on finding inspiration. How do you navigate

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challenges, and do you have any special advice for someone in my position? I am eagerly awaiting your positive feedback, I would be grateful if you could reply to my letter at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to hearing from you. If there is any opportunity for collaboration or if you need an extra group member, please do not hesitate to contact me. Kind regards, Salih Zeki Köni

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that you maintain a clear separation of ideas in your paragraphs for better coherence.

task achievement

Consider adopting a more consistent formal tone throughout the letter appropriate for writing to someone you have not met personally.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

captivating
stellar performance
entranced
musical prowess
virtuoso
encore
melodic
harmony
instrumental skills
musical journey
mentorship
aspiring
collaboration
feedback
inspired
invaluable guidance
musical aspirations
appreciation
influenced
répertoire

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