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Band 7.5

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays,
sports
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 are very famous all around the world and doing many races every year that involve from many
countries
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,
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 hosted by respective
countries
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 for each year. In my opinion, I definitely agree with hosting an international
sports
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event
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 is very good for the
country
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 because it can be got a good face of our
country
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. Generally, hosting an international sport is argued by some people because it is not an easy one for the
country
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.
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, hosting the international sport is basically needed lots of time for hosting
country
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 that they have to use lots of time on it
instead
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 of doing the other necessaries of the
country
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.
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, one other example is that billions of money are needed to spend on the
sports
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event
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 to accomplish the race.
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 not supported for the basic requirements of the
country
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 that means all of the times and money are used upon the
sports
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event
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 and need to worry throughout the time not to get losing the
country
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’s face and bitchy comments from the other
countries
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.
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, some people totally agree with hosting the international
sports
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event
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that is
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 the chance of the hosting
country
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 to get attention from the other
country
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.
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, our
country
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, Myanmar, hosted the international
sports
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event
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 SEA GAME in 2013.
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 Myanmar is a developing
country
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, it could host the best that the creation and decoration for the race, got not only the good comments but
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 attentions from around the
countries
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 that could support and got chances for our
country
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 to develop more and more by joining the hands with the other
countries
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. To conclude, I absolutely agree with hosting the
sports
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event
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 in the
country
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 in order to get good experiences for the
country
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 and can fill the requirements of the
country
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.
Submitted by Shwe Yamin on

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