Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

There are some nations

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follow limited working hours.

This

assists employees to work enthusiastically, eventually ,

this

could improve

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growth of the countries.

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essay will support my view in the following paragraphs.

First

and foremost, when working time shortens, which dramatically enhances the efficiency of the staff.

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, they would enjoy a sufficient amount of free time to both relax with family and recharge their energy,

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they would be more productive.

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, they would feel work-life balance and

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to focus more on their targets when they come back to

office

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after the rest period.

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,

this

schedule implemented in some hospitals in India and it was found that nurses were able to provide

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better care and patients felt that they were nursed more sincerely than before.

Therefore

, it is believed that 6 hrs duty is far more efficient than long day works. The productivity can

be surged

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when staff worked with more energy and positivity.

This

is because staff rarely get tired and bored as they work short duration.

By contrast

, when they continuously perform duties , they hardly attend family functions and able

perform

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commitments, these issues can

be resulted

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in a lot of stress and struggles.

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, it has been identified that long shifts can cause dissatisfaction and low productivity ,

then

, the companies may witness a huge loss in their income and overall

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. In conclusion, implementation of a shorter work schedule can not only bring a positive attitude among employers

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but

results

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a big advancement in the form of high income.