In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

Nowadays , more community expect to live more than ever before. In many nations around the world , growth

expectancy

will go higher .

This

essay will consider the main causes of rising apply average life

expectancy

, before proposing two possible solutions . Perhaps the most important cause of an increase in average life

expectancy

is the number of a nation who retired at an early

age

.

As a result

, if the proportion of

people

who retired is increasing , the load on the government will be rising

such

as a pension , the government is always giving a pension for

people

after pullout and

this

would be an

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on the economy .Another key factor is the percentage of young

people

who will look after elderly

people

will be declining .

This

means that the young

people

who need to work at least 12 hours per day because of the contribution , there will bear to pay taxes at an old

age

and that’s difficult . Fortunately ,

however

,there are two promising solutions to

this

problem.

First

of all, the evacuation

age

, the ministry should be increase the old

age

of retirement so the individual can be able to take care of themselves .

Secondly

, encourage immigration .

This

means the social authorities should advocate immigration to increase the number of young public who will pay duty .

For instance

, if foreign folk tend to move into other countries ,

then

the tax rate would be balanced to a great extent . In conclusion , rising in average

expectancy

of life is a serious problem which is primarily caused by

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the number of retirement public , along with the proportion of the young population who will afford

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. I recommend that the government address

this

issue by increasing the retirement youth and encourage immigration .