More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and other are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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Due to human acts towards nature, a myriad of wild animal species have
disappeard
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disappeared
and others are on the verge of extinction. In
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essay, I will outline the main reasons why
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phenomenon is taking place and probable solutions which must be implemented to settle
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issue.
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, since
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revolution,
population
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around the world has multiplied widely. Because of that fact, animal
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resources
and
food
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industria
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increased their activities.
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, animal
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resources
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,
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as red meat, chicken, honey, propolis, are causing ecological disturbances, since farm species production for food purposes requires enormous pieces of earth. To illustrate
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, a notable justification
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the great cattle breeders in Brazil who are responsible for burns and
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rewarding
of the Amazonia rainforest, with the excuse that the area will be used for progress and to improve the market in the state.
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, as a matter of fact, rubbish production
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has risen, leading to water pollution and
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of several aquatic beings. The documentary film Seaspiracy,
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, portrayed clearly the impacts of plastic
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marine life and how the fishing market is going to collapse the marine
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ecosystem
ecosystems
by the middle of
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century.
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, there are
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of measures that can be taken in order to mitigate the impacts resulting from carnivorism,
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as becoming vegan. Starting veganism, as least of
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matter, is boycotting the production chain and,
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, not collaborating with
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collapsing.
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, it will not end with the meat
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business
, starting somewhere with someone might help, even if it is minimum. To sum up, the reason why non-human species are on the endangered list
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the carnivorous habits that the majority have.
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, starting a plant-based diet would improve
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status.
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