MORE AND MORE YOUNG PEOPLE ARE USING DRUG AND ALCOHAL AND AS A RESULT, BREAKING A LAW. WHAT ARE CAUSES OF THIS PROBLEM WHAT ARE THE SOME POSSIBLE SOLLUTIONS.

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A new era comes with much new technology and development. Some negative substances
also
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occurred
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as drug and alcohol. Most young
people
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are involving in drinking and smoking due to several reasons. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall analyze the major reason behind
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and sort out some reasonable solutions.
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of all, all these drugs and alcohols are easily available in society. Especially, alcohol and smoking substances, teenagers are buying from the market. To illustrate my point, in many megacities, 60% of a youngster who is under age buying and selling drugs. The report said, these teenagers have contact with the supplier and spread these materials to other
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.
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, parental issues in the family. Many mother-father lives separately,
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effect on
children
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.
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to
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, parents do not care what their
children
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do all day.
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,
children
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also
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live their life with full freedom, they could not know what is wrong and right. They take some negative steps in their life and later they face a terrible situation. There are a few steps to solve
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problem
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. The predominant solution is that the government should take some strict action against those
people
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who sell illegal substances to the
children
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such
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as make some laws and regulation to the
liquior
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liquor
shops.
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, in India, shopkeepers sell alcohol to anyone. They do not see any ID card of the person
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if he/she is under age or an adult person. The government takes some serious action
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these kinds of
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.
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, parents are responsible
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their
children
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. They have to look
afer
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after
them. If they have any relationship
problem
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then
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they have to go to
therapist
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to solve their internal matter so that their
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does
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not have to face any kind of
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. In conclusion, the major role of
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problem
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is the government, they should make rules to control alcoholic substance.
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, parents have full control
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their
children
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activity.
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