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The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems . What do you think are the main problems connected with using the web ?what solutions you can suggest?

#internet #web
The
use
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internet
 technology has increased drastically over the past few years. It gives us
enormous
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 amount of information no doubt
in
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that.
However
, in
life
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the life
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 of
humans
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the
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 large amount of
use
 has caused many difficulties.
This
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drawbcaks
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drawbacks
 of
the
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internet
 technology and suitable solutions along with
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a conclusion
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. To commence with, the major downside is, most of the
people
 spend ample amount of
time
 on the
internet
 without any considerable reasons. Nowadays social
meadia
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media
 is one of the popular things to do in the list of young
people
.
Thus
people
 just seat
ans
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and
 scroll
instagram
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Instagram
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,
twitter
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Twitter
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,Facebook which leads to
lack
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 of physical activity.
For instance
, one is spending leisure
time
 on the
internet
hence
 there is no
time
 to do creative
activities
,physical
activities
 or other important tasks. Another disadvantage is ,there is a lack of privacy and security. In
this
morden
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modern
 era ,
people
 can search
about
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 anyone and can do antisocial
activities
.
Moreover
, online payment and online transactions are increasing
repidly
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rapidly
.
Consequently
,
people
 are facing more online fraud cases than ever
than
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before.
For instance
, according to the survey of Times of India, it shows that
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 of cheating through the
internet
 has increased 45% of
times
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 in the
last
 30 years.
This
 number shows that how unsafe to
use
 the
internet
 for money transfer. Some control measures should be taken to control
this
 problem.
Firstly
, everyone should monitor their screen
time
 for
computer
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the computer
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 , mobile etc and try to reduce the
use
 of the
internet
 for useless
activities
.
Furthermore
, one should only
use
 safe methods for banking
activities
 as well as
double check
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 with the authorities. To sum up, it can be concluded that the
internet
 is
a
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benificial
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beneficial
 but it should be used wisely and
securily
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security
securely
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • widespread use
  • main problems
  • associated with
  • cybercrime
  • hacking
  • privacy
  • data security
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • addiction
  • excessive screen time
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • online scams
  • fraud
  • loss of productivity
  • impersonal communication
  • social isolation
  • digital divide
  • solutions
  • suggest
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