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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

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Abandonment in going out in the middle of the
night
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 by
teenagers
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 is established as a low in some dozens of US . In my view , it would be as merit because of some profitable result. In the following essay , the reason for my agreement with
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 idea will be discussed . Increasing safety for the youth would be the most powerful full cause of seeming to establish a curfew to prevent
teenagers
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 staying out till
night
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 as an advantage .
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 , it is reported from news in the world that many crimes
such
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 as abusing of young people specialised girls have occurred over 12 at
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 . Apparently , because of
proper
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 situation in the
night
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 like darkness , doing crimes are rather than
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that is
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 incredibly dangerous for a teenager who is weak to defendant herself.
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 , if adolescent
stay
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 outdoor lonely at
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 , they will not be able to be safe unless with their
families
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. The
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 reason for having a positive view about imposing a law to abandon
teenagers
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 to be out after
specific
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 time at
night
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 would be the fact that a pleasant calmness and mental tranquillity in the
families
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 can be observed that prevent stress in
families
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 environments.
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 , the youth are
in
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 a sensitive age and parents are often worried about their children and coming back home late in the
night
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 is one of the most stressful
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 for mothers and fathers .
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 , if a boy goes out of home
in
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the
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2 a.m , the parent will be upset and wait for their young children so it makes
families
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 nervous.
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 , a family environment can be calm by making a rule to not allow to
teenagers
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 be out
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overnight
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over
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overnight
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night
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. In conclusion , in my view , preventing adolescents to spend time
in
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outdoor by making a low is a positive point because the sooner children come back home at
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 , the more safety and tranquillity in them and their
families
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 will appear .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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