in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why may this be the case. Do you think this is a positive or negative situation.
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more beneficial for people , as compared to buying a home . In my Correct your spelling
considered
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,opinion
which
has manifold drawbacks , which can be expressed in Correct pronoun usage
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To begin
with , in this
way individuals has the pressure on their mind how to manage rent
for next
month for paying rent
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in order
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.if folks merely thought about these kinds of things ,it will play negative
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a negative
affect
on their mental health. Correct your spelling
effect
For example
,the headline in 'Moscow Time' revealed that in 2017 'USA' citizens affect their health by thinking more and more about their household rent
. Thus
, living in rent
is not a tremendous role in
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person
life .
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a person
the person
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Furthermore
Further more
, people all savings go for paying Correct your spelling
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rent
and it paves the way to depression and tension .to explain it , they do not have enough money to spend on them to live life more joyful and entertain themselves after the hectic lifestyle. Due to this
human beings suffer from depression, anxiety , tension ,and myriad other problems .since increase
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the price
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the public
plethora
of health troubles . Correct article usage
a plethora
For instance
, in Germany peoples have to suffer from these challenges because cost
of living is Add an article
the cost
to
high .
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are giving
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