Some people think that public libraries are no longer important, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to the importance of public
libraries
. Some
people
insist that public
libraries
lose popularity in the future, while others opine that the importance of them will not change. In
this
essay, I am going to discuss both sides of the arguments and examine the reasons why I believe public
libraries
are important.
To begin
with, there are two reasons why
people
think societies no longer need public
libraries
. The
first
reason is that they can be replaced by the Internet and related technologies. Nowadays,
people
are able to read
books
online services
such
as Kindle
as a result
of the development of technologies. If all
books
are
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, no one will go to
libraries
.
In addition
, recently, private owned
libraries
have become popular in Japan. That plays the role of a library, a study space, and a social meeting place.
On the other hand
, some
people
claim the importance of public
libraries
for two reasons.
Firstly
, public
libraries
are not only the place for reading
books
but
also
for studying and social gathering. In facts, the local library is always filled with students who study for university entrance exams. On top of that, public
libraries
play an important role to preserve
books
, magazines and newspapers. In fact, The National Diet Library in Japan keeps all publications that accounts for around 50 million. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the arguments have merits.
However
, I believe public
libraries
have
the
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society.
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is because they provide
the
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place to study for
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, and they preserve precious
books
.
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