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Some people think that public libraries are no longer important, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to the importance of public
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. Some
people
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 insist that public
libraries
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 lose popularity in the future, while others opine that the importance of them will not change. In
this
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 essay, I am going to discuss both sides of the arguments and examine the reasons why I believe public
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 are important.
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 with, there are two reasons why
people
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 think societies no longer need public
libraries
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. The
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 reason is that they can be replaced by the Internet and related technologies. Nowadays,
people
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 are able to read
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 online services
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 as Kindle
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 of the development of technologies. If all
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 are
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detailed
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, no one will go to
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.
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, recently, private owned
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 have become popular in Japan. That plays the role of a library, a study space, and a social meeting place.
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, some
people
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 claim the importance of public
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 for two reasons.
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, public
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 are not only the place for reading
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 but
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 for studying and social gathering. In facts, the local library is always filled with students who study for university entrance exams. On top of that, public
libraries
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 play an important role to preserve
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, magazines and newspapers. In fact, The National Diet Library in Japan keeps all publications that accounts for around 50 million. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the arguments have merits.
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, I believe public
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 have
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 significant role
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 society.
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 is because they provide
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 place to study for
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, and they preserve precious
books
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.

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