Today, people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose, because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh its disadvantages?
Nowadays we may not only enjoy our talking or meeting through touching one button on a small screen whenever we are and wherever we are，but we
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may enjoy our travelling with a variety of means of transport. There is no doubt that the new science and technology are bringing huge changes into our life.
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, for our daily life, people could live or work at any place they are willing to, even miles away from their hometown as they could be back home easily by bus, underground, private car, fairy, flight and so on and stay in touch with their family at any time by the means of communication equipment.
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natural resources and the pollution of the environment. Another notable problem is that people are becoming more and more over-dependent on using all types of digital devices. Some researches have shown that these kinds of products would generate Correct article usage
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new human illnesses and would have Correct article usage
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