Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, give details of the last repair work what the problems are now how you would like the landlord to solve these problems

Dear Mr Brown, I am writing to inform you about several issues in the apartment that I am renting;
however
, they should be fixed as soon as possible. It is known that the
last
renovation and some additional minor cosmetic repairs were made about three years ago. Now, there is a fascinating all-new kitchen with these shiny white cabinets and a marble countertop, much better than the old one.
However
, But yesterday, I suddenly noticed a puddle in
this
marvelous
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kitchen. Much to my disappointment, I discovered that the faucet was is leaking
,
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and that the water from it had damaged the cabinet's facade, and,
as a result
, it had got ruined. In
the
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light of
this
annoying occasion, perhaps it would be possible to fix the tap by calling a plumber.
In addition
, the cabinet facade needs
is
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need to be replaced with a new one or
to
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be restored somehow by a carpenter because of its inappropriate view. I look forward to hearing from you. / I hope you will address
this
issue as soon as possible. Sincerely Yours, Lina Sidorova
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