Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership & use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to transportations. Some people insist that authorities should ban the usage of personal

cars

, and develop

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alternative ways of transport. I strongly agree with

this

opinion because private

cars

cause serious

accidents

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and those harm

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environment.

To begin

with, the

first

reason why I claim banning of private ownership and use of

cars

is that

this

results in severe

accidents

. In fact, there were around 300,000 incidents happen in 2020 in Japan due to car ownership, and 3,000 people were killed.

This

is because, private car owners need a driver's license

that is

relatively easy to obtain, despite

cars

are

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potentially dangerous transportation.

In contrast

, taxi drivers, who drive

cars

as an occupation, are required an additional license

that is

more difficult to get.

Hence

they are less likely

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to

accidents

.

In addition

to

this

, another reason why I supporting

this

is that private possession of

cars

may destroy the global environment. As President Jose Mujica, known as the poorest president, remarked in his famous speech

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if all Indians have private

cars

, as well as Germans, do, there will be no enough oxygen to breathe. As a matter of fact,

cars

emit harmful gases,

such

as carbon dioxide, and

consequently

, global warming is advanced since greenhouse gases discharged by

cars

. To conclude, I reiterate my complete agreement with the idea.

This

is because private car drivers cause severe

accidents

, and personal possession of

cars

advance environmental problems.