Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership & use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to transportations. Some people insist that authorities should ban the usage of personal

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, and develop

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alternative ways of transport. I strongly agree with

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opinion because private

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cause serious

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and those harm

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environment.

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reason why I claim banning of private ownership and use of

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is that

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results in severe

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. In fact, there were around 300,000 incidents happen in 2020 in Japan due to car ownership, and 3,000 people were killed.

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is because, private car owners need a driver's license

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relatively easy to obtain, despite

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potentially dangerous transportation.

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, taxi drivers, who drive

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as an occupation, are required an additional license

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more difficult to get.

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they are less likely

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.

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, another reason why I supporting

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is that private possession of

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may destroy the global environment. As President Jose Mujica, known as the poorest president, remarked in his famous speech

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if all Indians have private

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, as well as Germans, do, there will be no enough oxygen to breathe. As a matter of fact,

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emit harmful gases,

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as carbon dioxide, and

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, global warming is advanced since greenhouse gases discharged by

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. To conclude, I reiterate my complete agreement with the idea.

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is because private car drivers cause severe

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, and personal possession of

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advance environmental problems.