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In the future, people may have to live on other planets. Some think that it is therefore important to spend money researching other planets such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people believe that at the end of
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 century human will colonize other planets or the moon. So, some think that it is necessary to spend a large amount of
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 on the research of another sphere
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 as mars. While others think that
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 should be spent to make our own
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 beautiful. I agree with the former view.
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 essay will discuss my views in the forthcoming paragraphs. To reckon with, I agree that nowadays science and technology are very vast and the scientists can easily find the other globe to live. Scientists should spend
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 on the
earth
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 to make it beautiful.
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, to the research of other planets high fuel, artificial intelligence, labours are needed millions of cash which can be spent on the
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 and make it pollution-free.
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, In 2019, a missile was sent to mars by the ISRO and unfortunately, it crashes on the way. The government spend 10 million on
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 project which can spend on our
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 to make it pollution-free.
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, most people think that the public
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 that they pay tax can be utilised to make eco-friendly products. The government should organise some campaign regarding the environment to aware folks and
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 should
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 plant trees to make the environment pollution-free.
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 Sunday, I read an article regarding the environment in Times square in which I read a couple of Myanmar planted thousands of trees to make the
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 pollution-free. It is a really great initiate by society. To conclude, In my personal view, I believe the
earth
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 is a beautiful
planet
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 and people easily adapt to the changes on
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. So, spending
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 on other planets
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 as mars is really wasted.
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