Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why?

Mostly all
people
search for an interesting living
life
but some individuals tend to live
boring
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a boring
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life
. It is argued that some
people
prefer to
change
for new
experience
, while others prefer to live uninteresting
life
without any
change
.
This
essay will discuss both parts of living including my opinion supported by reasons. On the one side, some
people
love
to
change
and
experience
new
things
in
the
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life
including all aspects.
This
kind of
people
feel
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refreshed if they go for new
things
.
Although
sometimes trying new
things
considered
as
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expensive,
people
enjoy spending on
such
activities
such
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as
traveling
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travelling
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around the world. Our Human Resource
manager
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Manager
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,
for
example
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he quit his job just to travel around the world and he is sharing his
experience
and encouraging
people
to travel around the world. I
love
to try new
things
because
this
enhances my
experience
in
the
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life
and in the way
which
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in which
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I live.
Furthermore
, I am a person who
admire
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admires
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to explore
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exploring
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and always I switch very fast
,
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since I feel bore from repeating the same
things
.
On the other hand
, some
people
don
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do
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not prefer exploring new
things
and they are stick to their routines.
Such
people
even always will visit
same
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the same
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places because they feel it means a lot
for
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to
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them. Some
people
also
do not
change
their habits, they feel
weak
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the weak
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person does .Obviously, there is no harm in visiting new places, and
however
, they feel happy in doing these
things
. My family
for example
always visits London, almost
each
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every
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year;
nevertheless
, I won’t spend
such
huge sums by visiting the same country. I firmly not included in
this
group , I usually fed up easily with repeated
things
and I prefer to visit each country each year , so I can learn new
things
and know about
different
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a different
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culture. In conclusion, I feel there is a positive
relation
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between
people
’s personality and their way of living. There is no good or bad living style that, some
love
to
change
and explore new ways of living and others
love
to keep doing the same
things
. I prefer to learn new ways of living and always search for something new.
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