Politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued there is no requirement of publicizing news related to the personal lives of a public servant. I strongly agree with

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statement because media should be focused on their social activities

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of personal lives.

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with, there are enormous reasons for media should not be printed for assemblyman personal aspects.

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, the minister is

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a normal human

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, we do not care about their's private aspects and we only concentrate on their welfare deeds towards society.

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, whatever happens in their own life whereas how they will perform to society and people is the most significant factor.

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, many media have been writing to the politician's own life

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of what they have done in social activities to the community when election campaign repercussion, the population admire to their's own life and voted in a particular party.

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, every person has a dark side at the same the politicians

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have ,

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, social television and newspapers should not be telecasted to their's dark side because

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affects their political career soul

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repercussion, they might be gotten stress and depression.

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, in UK prime minister Boris johnson recently has married and his age is 56 while the television is showing theirs' pictures and talking too much. Ergo, everyone has a rights to live freedom and anything can do. To conclude, certainly the public servant has been working for people even though they

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have a rights to live desire growth apart from political. We can be criticized for their social activities whereas we cannot have a right to criticise their's private growth aspects. Ergo, the newspaper should not be published to their's own growth matter and they should be published the assemblyman social deeds and welfare. I hope

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trend is conducive to a healthy community.

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Topic Vocabulary:

intrusion
accountability
transparency
sensationalism
privacy
public interest
collateral damage
precedent
responsible journalism
exploitation
democratic processes
media culture
balance

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