More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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are the wealth of the

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. Nowadays, more and more teenagers are turning overweight in industrialized countries.

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is a major problem for the nations as its growth depends on the younger generation. I will discuss the reasons and their effects in

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essay.

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development is directly dependent on its local communities and the communities progress is

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based on the living families. As the eating culture is changed over the past few years, most of the

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are now habituated to fast food which is completely unhealthy and they are putting on excess weight and

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bothers their living communities and ends up with a lot of weight-related

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issues.

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the

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's improvement when compared to other wealthy nations of an active lifestyle.

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, in one of the meetings at the international level, the WHO warned few countries to take immediate actions of their country teenagers

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as the reports says they are suffering from obesity.

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, when

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are not healthy, the government should fund more on

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care systems and

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money can be invested somewhere else.

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, if families ensure that their kids are engaged in different physical activities unlike sedentary lifestyle and follow a healthy diet

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there is no need for more investment in public

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care and that money can be spent on different areas.

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, If all the local

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participate more in games and sports they will become healthy teenagers so there is no need for

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system and other public systems like education could be improved. To conclude, the younger generation is becoming excess weight causing not only their families suffering but their

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too.

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major problem should be considered seriously and steps to be taken to minimise

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cause so that results will be healthy to the developed countries.