are the wealth of the
. Nowadays, more and more teenagers are turning overweight in industrialized countries.
is a major problem for the nations as its growth depends on the younger generation. I will discuss the reasons and their effects in
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development is directly dependent on its local communities and the communities progress is
based on the living families. As the eating culture is changed over the past few years, most of the
are now habituated to fast food which is completely unhealthy and they are putting on excess weight and
bothers their living communities and ends up with a lot of weight-related
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's improvement when compared to other wealthy nations of an active lifestyle.
, in one of the meetings at the international level, the WHO warned few countries to take immediate actions of their country teenagers
as the reports says they are suffering from obesity.
are not healthy, the government should fund more on
care systems and
money can be invested somewhere else.
In other words
, if families ensure that their kids are engaged in different physical activities unlike sedentary lifestyle and follow a healthy diet
there is no need for more investment in public
care and that money can be spent on different areas.
, If all the local
participate more in games and sports they will become healthy teenagers so there is no need for
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system and other public systems like education could be improved.
To conclude, the younger generation is becoming excess weight causing not only their families suffering but their
major problem should be considered seriously and steps to be taken to minimise
cause so that results will be healthy to the developed countries.