Some people believe that History should not be taught as a subject anymore because it is already old and outdated. Others think that is should still be kept. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although
it has been suggested that teachers ought not to pass on any historical information to students at school owing to its historic and ancient, other people argue that history
also
should be a subject
nowadays. I agree with the second
idea as learning history
is beneficial for a student’s learning efficiency and effectiveness.
On the one hand, some people who present that educated workers should not look at history
as a subject
believe that spending time
teaching history
wastes precious time
and resources. The reason is that all contents, such
as past generations’ behaviours, which are documented in history
have happened, which is no longer useful and means nothing in current life. For instance
, individuals who are learning at school are told that how their ancestors discovered plants or created telephones. That information is disconnected from our current situations, thus
learning those ridiculous knowledge
is a waste of their Change the determiner
that ridiculous knowledge
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time
and energies.
On the other hand
, some individuals, including me, say being taught history
is a good way to increase learners’ academic performance. This
is because some subjects like biology are extremely complex and tedious, if students spend a great deal of their time
on those subjects, their concentrations and enthusiasms towards
learning would be reduced, Change preposition
for
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thus
impairing their efficiency. By contrast
, their mind can take a break and become more refreshed when they are studying history
. As an illustration, history
is a compulsory subject
in china since the
secondary school. Most Chinese pupils are convinced that having a Correct article usage
apply
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history
class provides them with a good chance to escape from excessively difficult projects, which gives them a period of time
to have a rest, thus
contributing to their comprehension of other knowledge.
In conclusion, although
people vary in their opinions about whether history
should be given up as a subject
or not, I am of the opinion that students still need to learn history
as it has a massive upside on their academia.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.