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The two maps show the town of Langley in the years 1910 and 1950 and the urban developments that took place. Overall, there were a number of notable changes to the buildings and amenities of
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 had a combination of residential and industrial features, but by 1950 the industrial features had largely disappeared. Whereas in 1910 a railway line ran through the neighbourhood, by 1950
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 had been removed.
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, the townhouses which used to dominate the 1910 map had been replaced by blocks of flats by 1950, and the areas of wasteland had gone. Another major change to the
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 in 1950 was the development of more commercial and recreational features. The demolition of
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 row of houses on Sherman Street and the removal of the railway line made room for a spacious park and children's play
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. On the commercial side, to the right of the
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 some new stores were built on the aptly named New Lane, replacing the small store of 1910, and the cafe and laundry were relocated. Overall, the
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 was renovated extensively, seeing fundamental changes to its residential accommodation, and its commercial and recreational facilities were developed.
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