Some people say that punishment is the best way to teach children to behave well, while others disagree and point out that rewarding and praising them is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As the education method is altering in the modern world, claims start to differ when it comes to the fact that whether punishment or praise is better than the other. Some hold that juniors need to be warned and in some cases even punished for their errors, while other people deem that every problem will be

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with rewarding and praising. In

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essay, I will indicate the corrections of the view of praise in child education.

First

and foremost, the possible effects of being punished on juveniles'

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inner selves

inner-selves

should be scrutinized. Most mothers and fathers impulsively tend to scream or shout to their children as soon as they recognize their misbehaviours.

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, they generally avoid talking about the reasons behind

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anger to their offspring,

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, youngsters cannot grasp what they did incorrectly as well as they might be inclined to repeat the action. According to a recent report, children insulted so often, especially in front of other people, by their parents are struggling to launch a new occasion brave heartedly and usually have a

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personality in their future lives.

On the contrary

, provided that juveniles are raised by enduring approaches and positive motivations

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as getting rewarded for their ethical actions, they most likely become more confident individuals and

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leads them not to be either intimidated for making mistakes or persistent

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perpetuating their wrong behaviours.

For instance

, one of my friends

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parents are both psychologists has been raised by

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given way; he always narrates his childhood years as a blissful term of his life and depicts positive effects of

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raising model filled with praises on his personality. In conclusion, much as long-standing claims about raising methods have been discussed for decades, I opine it's crystal clear that encouraging juveniles should become a substitute for insulting.