There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: describe what the problem with the changing rooms is say what happened the last times you complained explain what you want the manager to do.
Dear Mr Adams,
My name is
Shoira
and I am a member of the swimming pool located in Sharks street. I am writing Correct your spelling
Shira
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the toilet and shower conditions in your swimming pool.
I am a permament
member of the Dinamo swimming pool, I like its location and Correct your spelling
permanent
facilities
offered. Correct article usage
the facilities
However
, everytime
when I have to use the toilet in the changing room I feel disgusting. More specifically, the toilets are very dirty, some of them are broken Replace the word
every time
thus
, it is impossible to flash water.
I have already complained about this
situation before. Despite the promise that the issues would be eliminated, no actions have been taken untill
now.
I would concede that keeping toilets clean may require additional efforts, Correct your spelling
until
however
you should understand its importance in Add a comma
,however
maintaing
the clientage. I would like to suggest replacing old and broken toilets Correct your spelling
maintaining
to
new ones and putting a shift to clean them every hour.
I look Change preposition
with
foward
to your Correct your spelling
forward
apropriate
actions.
Yours Sincerely,
Correct your spelling
appropriate
Shoira
Correct your spelling
Shira
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