There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: describe what the problem with the changing rooms is say what happened the last times you complained explain what you want the manager to do.

Dear Mr Adams, My name is
Shoira
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Shira
and I am a member of the swimming pool located in Sharks street. I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the toilet and shower conditions in your swimming pool. I am a
permament
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permanent
member of the Dinamo swimming pool, I like its location and
facilities
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offered.
However
,
everytime
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when I have to use the toilet in the changing room I feel disgusting. More specifically, the toilets are very dirty, some of them are broken
thus
, it is impossible to flash water. I have already complained about
this
situation before. Despite the promise that the issues would be eliminated, no actions have been taken
untill
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until
now. I would concede that keeping toilets clean may require additional efforts,
however
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you should understand its importance in
maintaing
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maintaining
the clientage. I would like to suggest replacing old and broken toilets
to
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new ones and putting a shift to clean them every hour. I look
foward
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forward
to your
apropriate
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appropriate
actions. Yours Sincerely,
Shoira
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Shira
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • frequent user
  • specific issues
  • cleanliness
  • hygiene
  • broken facilities
  • lack of supplies
  • address the issue
  • response
  • emphasize
  • well-maintained
  • comfort
  • hygiene
  • politely
  • firmly
  • request
  • resolve
  • prompt resolution
  • discuss
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