You live in a room in college which you share with another student. There are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain the problems and why is it difficult to work say how you would like the situation resolved
Dear Mr Adams,
My name is Mary and I am a
first
-year student at Noth Carolina College. I am writing this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with an arranged room for me.
I have started my first
year full of enthusiasm and was eager to study. However
, I was disappointed to know my roommate better. He likes to listen to loud music and spends hours talking on the phone which makes it impossible for me to study.
I have tried many times to cope with the noise and concentrate on my lessons. But I am afraid that it seriously hampers my academic performance. I have also
tried to talk with my roommate. As a result
, he could keep his promise to be quiet for only 2 days and everything started again.
Hereby, I would like to kindly request you to move me or my roommate to another dormitory room, since it is impossible for me to focus on my academic performance.
I look forward to your positive reply.
Yours Sincerely,
MarySubmitted by shoira.shakirovna on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite