Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your examples and your knowledge and experience

I think that in our timeline students can’t be educated well compared to the past years. It's like looking through past years
graduated
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of graduated
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students seeing and observing them being more ethical and conscientious
people
.
Therefore
I agree that it's a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good
parent
. I will explain my views and examples one by one in
this
essay. I consider the fundamental needs of being a
parent
are coming from the education that
parent
candidates had before. As far as I’m considered being a
parent
is one of the toughest and riskiest roles that
people
can take in society. Undertaking the qualifications may be challenging for the ones that have their
first
child
. So as to minimize these situations, students should be learned the initials of being a
parent
. The crucial initial skill that a
parent
should have is ethical morals as for me. An aware
child
regarding ethics and morals may vary between environments, know the external rules, and know right and wrong conduct. In that case, the candidate may have the ability to depict and teach his kid the necessities in the right way. The
second
essentials that should be taught are respect and intellection. Providing that these abilities are involved in the curriculum, candidates will be almost ready and equipped for their parenthood process. To give an example, in situations your
child
behaves inappropriately. The
first
thing should have done is showing intellection. In conclusion,
people
were used to
educated
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with the lessons of ethics more but now it's not likely to see that kind of education. By adding new lessons to teach parenthood would be beneficial. Not only do these skills help to raise your
child
but
also
, develop you and your character as an individual.
Besides
providing that these skills are taught in schools to the young
people
, I’m sure as the wind blows the prosperity of the government will increase as well
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